{"id":1077,"date":"2018-10-25T20:17:47","date_gmt":"2018-10-26T03:17:47","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/briancebuhl.com\/?p=1077"},"modified":"2018-10-25T20:17:47","modified_gmt":"2018-10-26T03:17:47","slug":"my-novelette-the-exorcism-of-jack-evans","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/briancebuhl.com\/?p=1077","title":{"rendered":"My Novelette: The Exorcism of Jack Evans"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Good evening! Tonight is the final entry in my three part series talking about the most ambitious stories I&#8217;ve written.\u00a0 Like the previous two entries, I&#8217;ll be sticking with the same format.\u00a0 The primary goal is to provide insight into my creative process.\u00a0 A secondary goal, which I don&#8217;t think I mentioned in the previous posts, is to practice talking about my stories and describing what makes them special.\u00a0 I think this kind of practice is important for making me better at querying.<\/p>\n<p>Here is a list of the things I&#8217;ll talk about regarding\u00a0<em>The Exorcism of Jack Evans<\/em>.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>What It&#8217;s About<\/li>\n<li>The Inspiration<\/li>\n<li>The Writing Process<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3><strong>What It&#8217;s About<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p><em>The Exorcism of Jack Evans<\/em> is about a man named Jack that is murdered before the story even begins.\u00a0 He finds himself as a ghost hovering over his own still cooling body.\u00a0 He soon sets out after the person that shot him hoping that he can somehow make his revenge.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3><strong>What is it REALLY About<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p>This is actually the first time I&#8217;ve talked about this story like this, so I&#8217;m having a more difficult time describing this story than I had the other two.\u00a0 <em>The Exorcism of Jack Evans<\/em>\u00a0is split into three equal parts.\u00a0 The first part follows Jack as a ghost and his struggles and horror at existing without a body.\u00a0 The second part follows Jack&#8217;s murderer once Jack has caught up with him, and the third part follows the priest that ultimately brings Jack&#8217;s story to an end.<\/p>\n<p>When I started the story, I didn&#8217;t realize I was writing psychological horror.\u00a0 Given the things I knew would take place, I should have known.\u00a0 I probably didn&#8217;t think about it because I&#8217;ve never tried to write a horror story before.\u00a0 This one went to some very dark places.<\/p>\n<p>In terms of themes, there is quite a bit going on in a very short amount of time.\u00a0 There is a contrast across all three characters in how they deal with loss.\u00a0 I don&#8217;t want to talk about spoilers, but I will say that this touches on suicide, and there is some sexually graphic content.\u00a0 I think I handle both in a way that is respectful.\u00a0 I think the material belongs in this story.\u00a0 None of it is there for shock value or titillation.\u00a0 However, I feel it&#8217;s important to give people a fair warning before they read it.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3><strong>The Inspiration<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p>While listening to <a href=\"https:\/\/www.amazon.com\/Fifth-Season-Broken-Earth\/dp\/0316229296\/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1540521098&amp;sr=8-1&amp;keywords=the+fifth+season+n.k.+jemisin\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">N. K. Jemisin&#8217;s\u00a0<\/a><em>The Fifth Season,\u00a0<\/em>I had a really hard time with the parts that were in second person.\u00a0 I think it had a lot to do with it being an audio book.\u00a0 The narrator kept telling me that I did certain things and felt certain ways and I just kept arguing with her.\u00a0 The second person parts of the story made me feel uncomfortable.\u00a0 It made me feel like someone was trying to take over, and I didn&#8217;t like it.\u00a0 I wound up turning off the audio book without finishing it.<\/p>\n<p>The experience of fighting with the second person narration stuck with me.\u00a0 Some time later, I asked myself what I could do with a story in second person?\u00a0 Remembering how the audio book of\u00a0<em>The Fifth Season<\/em> made me feel, I decided that it would be perfect for a possession story.<\/p>\n<p>After that, I decided to write the story in three parts.\u00a0 The first part would be in first person, the second in second, the third in third.\u00a0 I came up with the name of the main character and the name of the story first.\u00a0 Then I did some plotting.<\/p>\n<p>All of the beats I wanted to cover in the first and second part seemed obvious to me from the start.\u00a0 The third part, on the other hand, gave me a hard time.\u00a0 I knew there&#8217;d be a funeral but I didn&#8217;t have a clear vision of anything else.\u00a0 For the longest time, I had no idea how I was going to wrap up the story because I didn&#8217;t know what the third part was all about.<\/p>\n<p>After listening to an episode of <a href=\"https:\/\/writingexcuses.com\/2018\/06\/03\/13-22-character-arcs\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Writing Excuses talking about character arcs<\/a>, I decided to apply the DREAM tool to all three parts or my outline to see what that would reveal.\u00a0 If you don&#8217;t click the link, DREAM stands for:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Denial<\/li>\n<li>Resistance<\/li>\n<li>Acceptance<\/li>\n<li>Exploration<\/li>\n<li>Manifestation<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>After applying that tool, I had a concrete view of what I was going to explore in the first and second part.\u00a0 The third part was still a little bit fuzzy, but I had enough to work with.\u00a0 I felt confident that I could write the story and that it would be powerful.<\/p>\n<p>On the cruise, I pulled out my outline and started writing it.\u00a0 I finished it earlier this week.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3><strong>Where is it Now?<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p>I haven&#8217;t shared it with anyone.\u00a0 I finished the first draft and I still need to do a good edit.\u00a0 It is 15,000 words which makes it a novelette.\u00a0 If you&#8217;re curious, the word count ranges look like this:<\/p>\n<table style=\"height: 142px;\" width=\"333\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th>Word Count<\/th>\n<th>Classification<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">Under 7500<\/td>\n<td style=\"text-align: center;\">Short Story<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">7500 to 17,499<\/td>\n<td style=\"text-align: center;\">Novelette<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">17,500 to 39,999<\/td>\n<td style=\"text-align: center;\">Novella<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">40,000 and above<\/td>\n<td style=\"text-align: center;\">Novel<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>I&#8217;ve written a few short stories before but I think this is my first novelette.\u00a0 It&#8217;s also my first adult psychological horror.\u00a0 I don&#8217;t know where I&#8217;d be able to sell this or if I even could.<\/p>\n<p>It is a really good story.\u00a0 Even though I started writing it for my own amusement and with no other audience in mind, I think it&#8217;s something special.\u00a0 However, with its length and subject matter, I won&#8217;t be surprised if it&#8217;s something that never goes anywhere.\u00a0 I&#8217;ll keep my eyes open but I won&#8217;t hold my breath.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>I hope you&#8217;ve enjoyed this series of posts.\u00a0 In November, I&#8217;m going to restart the novel I put on pause for NaNoWriMo last year.\u00a0 I don&#8217;t expect to reach 50,000 words in thirty days due to the nature of the story.\u00a0 I don&#8217;t think it&#8217;s going to be something I can rush.\u00a0 But I do have a complete outline to work from.\u00a0 In many ways, I&#8217;m more prepared for this year than I&#8217;ve been any other year.\u00a0 Starting in about a week, we&#8217;ll see how prepared I really am.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Good evening! 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