{"id":900,"date":"2017-10-04T19:59:59","date_gmt":"2017-10-05T02:59:59","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/briancebuhl.com\/?p=900"},"modified":"2017-10-04T19:59:59","modified_gmt":"2017-10-05T02:59:59","slug":"my-current-works-in-progress","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/briancebuhl.com\/?p=900","title":{"rendered":"My Current Works in Progress"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I have never sold a story, but I have a lot of material I&#8217;m working on, preparing them for sale.\u00a0 Tonight, I&#8217;m going to take a break from politics and real life and talk about all of the fiction I&#8217;ve been writing.<\/p>\n<p>Most of my works in progress aren&#8217;t actually getting worked on.\u00a0 They&#8217;re all in different states of completion, with some really close to completion, and others barely into the first draft.\u00a0 A lot of these stories don&#8217;t have proper names.\u00a0 I&#8217;m going to give their working names, their status, and a brief description.\u00a0 If you like any of these stories, let me know and I may move it up in my priorities.\u00a0 I&#8217;m listing them in the order in which I started them, and not in order of priority.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>The Arthur Kane Stories\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Status: It&#8217;s complicated.<\/p>\n<p>Description: The Arthur Kane Stories are three sci-fi\/mystery short stories woven together to form a novel, set on the moon and following a private investigator named Arthur Kane.\u00a0 I came up with the character and wrote a few short stories with him when I was 14.\u00a0 After my Dad died, I wrote The Arthur Kane Stories as way of dealing with my Dad&#8217;s death, though I didn&#8217;t know it at the time.\u00a0 I started this novel when I was 16 and finished it when I was 18.<\/p>\n<p>When I talk to people about The Repossessd Ghost, they often ask me if it is my first novel.\u00a0 The quesiton always makes me think of The Arthur Kane Stories.\u00a0 It&#8217;s really is my novel, even if it it is pretty terrible.<\/p>\n<p>A few people have read it over the years, and they say it&#8217;s not that bad.\u00a0 Recently, I&#8217;ve been retyping it, transposing it from my Apple IIgs to PC before the old hardware and discs fail.\u00a0 Retyping it has confirmed to me the low quality of the work.\u00a0 However, I did have some good ideas.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>Tales of the Day Knights\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Status: Unfinished First Draft<\/p>\n<p>Description: In this fantasy story, the Day Knights are defenders of good and order, paladins of the sun and righteous protectors of the free people.\u00a0 They fight the demons of night and the agents of chaos.\u00a0 But what happens when one of these agents of chaos is turned, no longer skulking in the shadows, but taking up arms to fight for the sun?<\/p>\n<p>I started this story while I was still working for my previous company.\u00a0 That was a time where I desperately wanted to write and be creative, but I worked late hours for not much money, and I just didn&#8217;t have the heart or energy to put into this story.\u00a0 There are some good ideas, and some good prose.\u00a0 I like establishing the black and white moral code, then messing everything up with shades of gray.\u00a0 I like the story of redemption and the questions of forgiveness that this story wants to ask.\u00a0 I&#8217;m not sure when I&#8217;m going to get back to it.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>The Clean Slate\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Status: Unfinished First Draft<\/p>\n<p>Description: The Bourne Identity meets Game of Thrones in this fantasy story where a group of heroes are reanimated from stone.\u00a0 They have no idea how they got there or who they are, and the kindly monk that greets them on reanimation sends them on a quest to save the world.\u00a0 Along the way, they discover that they may not have been heroes in their previous life, and much of what they&#8217;ve been sent to contend with is the results of their dark deeds.<\/p>\n<p>This was my first NaNoWriMo attempt.\u00a0 I didn&#8217;t get to 50,000 words, but I got to a little over 30,000.\u00a0 Before finishing the first draft, I sent the first chapter to my friend Tim, and he gave me his honest opinion.\u00a0 The prose fell flat, and it was not my best work.<\/p>\n<p>The story isn&#8217;t bad.\u00a0 I just started it poorly.\u00a0 I think it will be amazing when I go back and do it right.\u00a0 Again, I&#8217;m dealing with issues of redemption and forgiveness.\u00a0 If a person has no memory of doing some terrible deed, and no memory of even being an evil person, how close are they to redemption?\u00a0 How much do you hold them responsible?\u00a0 I also deal with some ideas concerning free will, disarmament of society, and whether or not the ends justify the means.\u00a0 I will get back to this some day, though there are other stories ahead of it in priority.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>Unclaimed Goods\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Status: Finished Second Draft<\/p>\n<p>Description: A baggage attendant starts his first day on the job, and the older, gruff attendant he&#8217;s replacing is understandably upset with him.\u00a0 The baggage that they&#8217;re dealing with are human bodies kept in stasis while the passengers spend their travel time in virtual reality.\u00a0 What happens when one of the bodies is unclaimed at destination?<\/p>\n<p>I wrote this short story with every intention of trying to sell it to Asimov&#8217;s.\u00a0 I wrote it after I met Sheila Williams, and she said at the time that this was the sort of story that she was looking for.\u00a0 After sending it through a writer&#8217;s workshop and my writer&#8217;s group, I tried sending it to Writers of the Future, and it was rejected.\u00a0 I became discouraged, and I haven&#8217;t done anything with it since.<\/p>\n<p>There are things that I can do to improve the story.\u00a0 There are some good ideas here.\u00a0 I just need to take some time to elevate them.\u00a0 I might revisit this story in December.\u00a0 Maybe I&#8217;ll actually send it to a magazine.\u00a0 If I can find the guts.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>The Repossessed Ghost\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Status: Finished Third Draft<\/p>\n<p>Description: A young repo-man from New Orleans discovers he&#8217;s psychic when he finds a ghost in the back of a car he&#8217;s recently repossessed.\u00a0 After he becomes a suspect in her murder, he flees with the ghost (Kate) to Sacramento and becomes entangled with a larger supernatural community.\u00a0 Eventually he must solve Kate&#8217;s murder in order to stop another from sharing her fate.<\/p>\n<p>This started as a NaNoWriMo project, and it is the first and only time I&#8217;ve succeeded in getting the 50,000 words in 30 days.\u00a0 Over the next couple of years, I revisited it, edited it, shared it with my writer&#8217;s group, shared it with an editor friend, and toiled over it on my own taking all of the advice into consideration.\u00a0 After the third set of revisions, I&#8217;ve finally started sending it out to find it a home.<\/p>\n<p>I like this story, but I&#8217;m tired of working on it.\u00a0 I have hopes that this will be my first traditionally published work.\u00a0 If that doesn&#8217;t work out, I&#8217;ll put it up on Amazon.\u00a0 It&#8217;s a good book.\u00a0 We&#8217;ll see if it has legs.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>Avatars\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Status: Finished Second Draft<\/p>\n<p>Description: A gamer in an elaborate virtual reality is killed in the game, and deals with a close friend that is known to the gamer only in the virtual world.<\/p>\n<p>I like this short story, though it could use a little bit more work.\u00a0 Only a couple of people have read it, and if I describe it more than I have, it will give away some of the things that I think make the story cool.\u00a0 It deals with identity, both real and online.\u00a0 It also deals with online relationships and the barriers of fear we put that can keep us from really connecting.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>Simon, of The Rock\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Status: Unfinished First Draft<\/p>\n<p>Description: In this fantasy novel, the boy named Sim yearns to become the man named Simon.\u00a0 But first, he must pass the right of passage which all people of The Rock tribe must endure.<\/p>\n<p>I came up with the Simon character while playing on Star Wars MUSH.\u00a0 I like this character.\u00a0 I want to see this character breathe again in a story all his own.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve got pages and pages of notes for the world building.\u00a0 I envisioned this book being the first of a trilogy.\u00a0 I&#8217;d thought about this series for years, and finally tried putting the words down for NaNoWriMo a couple of years ago.\u00a0 The story has a long, long way to go before it&#8217;s completed.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>The Adventurer&#8217;s Door\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Status: Unfinished First Draft<\/p>\n<p>Description: A teenage boy travels to his grandfather&#8217;s house with his mother after his mother gets a divorce.\u00a0 His grandfather gives him one rule: don&#8217;t open this door.\u00a0 Curiosity overcomes him, and he finds a way, which leads him to a perilous adventure on a pirate ship.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;d started this story with the intention of sending it to Jennifer Brozak.\u00a0 I made it a ways into the short story, but then got swept up in work and wound up missing the deadline.\u00a0 I like what I&#8217;ve written enough that I&#8217;ll eventually finish it, though it&#8217;s low on my list of priorities.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>Hero\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Status: Unfinished First Draft<\/p>\n<p>Description: A young woman, one of the War Dancers, gets in over her head after the walls fall and the champion of her people is mortally wounded.<\/p>\n<p>This was another failed NaNoWriMo project.\u00a0 I started it last year and barely made it into the second week of November before I gave up.\u00a0 Work just got too busy, my music schedule was too busy, and I was too tired to give this story the energy it deserved.<\/p>\n<p>The inspiration for this story is this song:<br \/>\n<iframe loading=\"lazy\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/5lLclBfKj48\" width=\"560\" height=\"315\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><br \/>\nEvery time I listen to the song, I get this powerful vision in my head.\u00a0 I will eventually write this story.\u00a0 It&#8217;s about an unlikely hero.\u00a0 It&#8217;s about finding hope when all hope is gone.\u00a0 It&#8217;s about finding strength in unlikely places, and overcoming adversity that looks insurmountable.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>Synthetic Dreams\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Status: Unfinished First Draft<\/p>\n<p>Description: Set 150 years after The Singularity, humanity is gone and those that are left are A.I.&#8217;s in synthetic bodies.\u00a0 The story follows two homicide detectives as they follow a trail of strange discorporations.<\/p>\n<p>I just started this story a few weeks ago.\u00a0 I really, really love it.\u00a0 This will probably be the most emotional story I&#8217;ve written as it deals with the human condition through non-human characters.\u00a0 It contends with religion, gender biases, what it means to be alive, and morality.\u00a0 I like the main characters.\u00a0 I like the setting.\u00a0 This one is going to go far.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m not going to finish it before November, so it&#8217;s going to get at least a month long pause.\u00a0 Maybe I&#8217;ll finish the first draft in early 2018.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>And that leads me to NaNoWriMo 2017.<\/p>\n<p>This year, I&#8217;m cheating a little bit.\u00a0 You&#8217;re supposed to work on a new novel.\u00a0 I am writing a new novel, but it&#8217;s based on The Arthur Kane stories.\u00a0 I&#8217;m keeping the main character, his partner, and his antagonist.\u00a0 I&#8217;m changing the world a bit.\u00a0 I&#8217;m making it first person.\u00a0 I&#8217;m going to focus on bringing out the noir elements of the story.\u00a0 I&#8217;m also adding some sci-fi ideas I&#8217;ve had over the years, like gladiator robot dog fights.<\/p>\n<p>It really is a new novel.\u00a0 Besides, I have to be well past some sort of statue of limitations.\u00a0 This story is going to be different enough that the original can&#8217;t even be considered a first draft.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>So that&#8217;s it.\u00a0 Those are my works in progress.\u00a0 There are other stories that I&#8217;ve worked on that I haven&#8217;t mentioned here.\u00a0 But these are the stories that I want to finish.<\/p>\n<p>If I ever manage to make the transition to becoming a full time writer, I have plenty of work to do.\u00a0 I don&#8217;t have a shortage of ideas.\u00a0 Just a shortage of 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